Monday, May 30, 2011

And She Smiled At Him

I've been contemplating how to describe a smile in terms of poetry - here is one attempt.



Closer though to a grimace
than to any grin,
for it was not the tugging
of your heartstrings
that drew apart
the curtains of your mouth,
but calculated show
for this audience,
that I might be
deceived and believe
my words could
still carry meaning,
a dozen scarlet roses,
to your door.

It was well received,
well reviewed too,
most critics were fooled,
but the audience knew
you no longer danced
for another, for me,
your soft patterns
now paced on the stage
for your delight
alone.

And the crowd saw me
abandoned,
alone.

1 comment:

  1. "drew apart / the curtains of your mouth" is a wonderful metaphor. way to go!

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